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Pony Poems!

Discussion in 'Fanfics & Writing' started by Recurrent Trotting, 11 July 2018.

  1. Recurrent Trotting

    Recurrent Trotting Do you feel the same?

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    I enjoy doing lil flash fics so I thought trying my hoof at a poem. If anypony feels like penning a verse or two quickly then you could put that in here too :3

    After the first one I might have a look at some poem writing advice :p so apologies if this one is bad.

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    Ocelus / Sister Winter

    The wind over the snowy planes is a thin, cold, wail, drawing the heat from my soul.
    The expanse's soft emptiness like unmarked time.
    This world is an image in glass,
    Even the interruption of sound is denied me as I push my frail form forward.

    The fire owns the room
    Gaudy decorations pay it homage
    As does my body with its closeness
    Now we are all here
    Now I've returned.

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    The theme for this was the lonelinness of self-centredness and the warmth of friendship :3 I felt that fitted Ocelus since she's a Ling and is very warm-hearted. The first bit is meant to be written like a cold wind wailing - all drawn out and such, as in the song. The second bit is meant to be like the quick cracklings of a fire and reflects the bouncier rhythm of the song as it comes to a close.
     
    #1 Recurrent Trotting, 11 July 2018
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